Episode 29, The Very Next Day You Gave My Heart Away

[Rob Hill]

As a part of the Absolute Production's Writer's Swap Month,
Episode 29 was guest written by Kelly Zollo, the creator of West Lake.

In this episode,

Melanie questions Demetrius about bringing Sidora to the party.
Alex, Travis & Anthony make peace with each other.
Sharon makes a plea to William.
Gloria and Jeffery spend time together.
Marsha begins to show signs of going off the deep end.

[Dallas]

What a treat! I must say Kelly's episode was more "heady", in the sense that Rob's episodes everything usually happens via dialouge. It was nice to go inside some of the characters heads, which Kelly does so well over on West Lake.

Eva -- What is it exactly that Marsha has over her that she feels like she has to be apart of her scheme? I must have missed something because if Eva doesn't want to be apart of the madness, DON'T BE! lol.

Anthony -- Uhhh, he has friends? These three are having scenes together, for the first time I think, so it seemed a little out of the blue. Plus, what is Alex's issue with Nathan? I know Nathan was shot ... but I don't remember him and Alex having scenes before? Some clarity from Rob would be good.

Melaine -- I feel for her. She is still hurting from the affair and Dementrius other women that it's sad to read. I was a bit put off by the line "Sidona enters Williams's office with a kiss" and then we were never treated to more. What kind of kiss? On the lips? On the cheek? What's going on there??

Overall, good episode. Some clarity on a few things, but i thought Kelly did a grand job.

[Rob Hill]

Kelly I enjoyed your episode sweetie, you took F&AD to a different sidel,
I feel like I should touch that side a little bit more often. I enjoyed it, honestly.

Sorry I'm so late with replying back to you, Dallas I know you have a few questions,
that needed to be answered. So here we go!

Marsha really doesn't have anything on Eva, Eva is beginning to feel a little bit guilty
for taking part in breaking up her parents' (Leona & Paul) bestfriends (Melanie & Demetrius).
Marsha has realized that and is beginning to play into that, but at the same time who would
want to be on Marsha's bad side right now.

Dallas, I laughed after I read you comments about Anthony, but yeah he has friends.
Anthony & Travis grew up together and Alex became friends with them after he moved to town and started dating Jasmine.
Alex & Nathan's problems are going show pretty soon, I admit it was a bit too soon for him to mention that without scenes.

Melanie is on fire People, she's going to be alright though, no worries.

Sidora & William has began a mini relationship, this is going to expand into something big soon!