Episode 31, CSI San Diego

[Rob Hill]

In this latest installment,

the people of San Diego take matters into their own hands
and do a little of their own investigation.

Sidora gets a visit from a familiar face.
Joshlynne figures out who set her up.
Paul tries to find a way to help his son.
Felicia gets bad news


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[Dallas]

Hey Rob,

What a nice episode, if I am honest. I found hardly any errors, and the storylines really went forward. Very nicely done.

Sidora -- I'm so glad you gave us a scene with her and Alex. Tying her into characters on the series always makes it easier for us to like/get to know a new character. I'm very interested in what she's doing in San Diego with Demetrius and not telling her family. Awesome job on these scenes.

Felicia -- I absolutely loved her in this episode. No more drowning her sorrows, instead after a talk with Demetrius (of all people!) she decides to fight for William. How nice. So freshing from the previous state she had been in. I do have one word of advice ... try not to over use Sidora. She's a new character with tons of potential, but remember the audience likes having newbies entered slowly

Lisa -- God, I hope Marsha ends us of her. I'm glad this storyline is seemingly going forward though.

Over all nice episode. I'm looking forward to the upcoming season finale!

d

[kellyzollo]

Alex/Sidora- I really didn't expect that so it is nice to see Sidora have ties to other characters.

Joshlynne/Sharon/Paige- I loved their scenes, I love to see friends sticking  by each other and this really was good. Poor Joshlynne being set up.

Paul/William/Jonas- I liked the emphasis on legal proceedings in their scenes. They felt well done and well researched Rob, so great job.

Lisa/Gloria- I liked their snooping around scenes. I am with Dallas I am rooting for Marsha to off Lisa though.

Felicia- Ok major props for making her try and fix things in her life instead of whining and mopping about it.  I was surprised that she called Sharon of all people as well, however I liked their scenes.

Like Dallas I would caution to not over do it with the Sidora stuff. Other than that Rob it was a great read! I look forward to the next one and the finale!

Kelly