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« on: June 30, 2010, 11:15:11 am »

In this latest installment of Forever & A Day,

- Jonathan & the Sterling Family awaits the arrival of Travis and Lisa's newborn baby.
- Eva worried about the outcome of Lisa's kidnapping and her involvement.
- North meets with Leona to discuss Anthony's case.

Next Episode is the Finale of Season 2

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« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2010, 04:33:25 pm »

Hey Rob!

Another good read … I love all the cattiness you add into the series. It reminds me a little bit of a like a The Hills or Real House Wives-esque type of vibe. But it certainly adds a lot of fun reading to the serial however.

The baby – I kept waiting for something, anything, to add more drama to the storyline. Like maybe, the stress of the kidnapping caused Lisa to have more of a dire situation. Alas, nothing happened, so I’m guessing that all will be okay from here on out. BTW, Stanley??? Where did you come up with that name? I was hoping for something more modern. I suppose it’s a nice touch with it  being in the family.

Melanie/Dementrius – What a nice scene with them making nice, even if it didn’t last too long. If we are supposed to believe that there is a rooting interest there, we have to see more scenes like that. I’m still curious to know if Joshlynne will hand Dementrius officially. I, for one, don’t her. I’m actually wondering what’s going to be her and Eva’s storyline now that Marsha is dead and gone. They seemingly will be able to keep their secrets safe with Marsha being dead.

Leona/North – I loved their scene! I knew that he was going to make her a wicked proposition, and of course she denies it. Still, it would be awesome for the trial to start going badly and thus she reconsiders. Very much like Indecent Proposal! North is adding a wicked new presence to the series, he’s my fav. New character.

Well done buddy … looking forward to the finale!

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« Reply #2 on: July 04, 2010, 08:01:37 pm »

Rob I read the episode on my phone while on the way to my in-laws but I wil respond as soon as I get home with my review. Overall it was a great.

Kelly
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« Reply #3 on: July 04, 2010, 11:28:49 pm »

The baby- I for one was thrilled with the change of pace in this episode with Stanley's birth, I felt it was really needed with all the Marsha stuff. I twas great to see the family gather during the birth!

Melanie/Demetrius- I again loved their scenes here, I think it has to do with me writing part of their split with the writer's swap. Like Dallas, I am interested in where you are taking Joshlynne/Eva now that Marsha is gone, and how it will effect Demetrius.

Leona/North– I really like that North is not afraid to get his hands dirty so to speak and I think he adds a great addition to the cast. His scenes with Leona were very good, I almost wanted her to agree to the offer, just to see that different side of things.

Overall a wonderful job Rob I can't wait for the finale!

Kelly
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« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2010, 09:25:43 am »

Hey guys I'm glad you all enjoyed everything...Dallas and Kelly I'll be visiting your series pretty soon for a good read.
I've been working on the Season Finale (Season 2) and Season Premeire (Season 3) of F&AD. But I expect nothing but greatness anyways. And Kelly did I see something about Dangerous Tides returning?Huh? You go girl!

So the episode before the Season Finale,

Baby Stanley- Dallas, I cracked up after I read your comment about the name, but when I revamped the storyline from what I written on the MSN Group the name was even worst than that! But I thought the whole birth itself would delivery some comedy after all the drama we had with Marsha....(moment of silence)! Plus the baby is going to be a seal that brings the Sterling family back together, especially after the year they've had.

Melanie/Demetrius- Sorry for the teaser guys but I thought it would be nice, but trust these two aren't done with each other...more fights to come. I'm still debating if Melanie & Joshlynne are going to clash with each other. Glad you all took notice to how quickly their emotions changed for each other.

Leona/North- All I can say is just wait...it's gets better!
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