Episode 27, "If You See Me, Walk On By"

[Rob Hill]

In the first part of Forever & A Day's Holiday Special,

-the citizens of San Diego attends Leona's annual Christmas party.
-Demetrius appearance leaves a negative effect on Melanie, Joshlynne, and his children.
-Anthony and Paige discuss the future of their marriage.
-Felicia attempts to visit her children.
-Two of Leona's party guest make exit that will leave the town talking.

Episode Theme Song

Walk on By- Aretha Franklin

[Dallas]

Rob,

Nice episode. I enjoyed the party ... it was fun to have a lot of people together in one place. I also love the element of red you added to the website. Very nice touch. It certainly stands out more, thats for sure.

To me, the stand out scenes were with Paige and Anthony at the grave yard. I still think that Paige herself is confused; one minute she's reflecting on her past times with Maurice, the next she's telling Anthony that sheloves him and wants to be with him. It's no wonder he is washing his hands of her ... not to mention she basically drove him to murder. Anyways, I thought those scenes were very well written.

I also liked how Dementruis showed up with another woman ... although I think it would have turned more heads if he arrived with Joshlynne, especially after their kiss in the last episode. Her being arrested was great.

On a final note, I really like the recast of Travis. Nicely done. (Also, MUCH better work with the editing in this episode).

[Rob Hill]

Hey Dallas, Nice to hear from you again.

First off, let me apologize for the lack of editing in Episode 26. I spent three days trying to edit this one.

In this episode, I wanted show that their was a community within F&AD, so I'm glad you liked it.
I'm also glad you enjoyed the new changes to the website, My favorite color is red I wanted to show th glamour side of F&AD,
as well as the reality side of it too so I think this new color scheme does a good job of showing that.

I thought Eddie Cibrian would be a better Travis and I think he's a much more interesting person who doesn't give enough credit,
so that's what brought the recast. I'm glad you liked the recast because I was super nervous how this change would be precieved.

With Paige's scene at the graveyard it more of her reflecting on her time with Maurice, though she is confused though. I had a great time
writing her scenes with Anthony, this storyline is not over so get ready for more as new faces put an interesting twist on this storyline.

Also the second season has about eight episodes left so heads are getting ready to fly, just thought you would like to know that.

[kellyzollo]

Hey Rob gosh I have been without internet for days minus the few times I was able to get on at my parents on their computer.

I read episode 26 and 27, I really loved 26, minus the editing which again has never really bothered me.

I love the addition of red to the site, I think it adds a nice sophistication to the look of F&AD that was needed for the new year. I also loved the theme song, great choice for what was going on.

I loved the party scenes as well, you guys here at AP Network do such a great job with something that I hate doing.

Paige/Anthony- Were really good to me something that I could stand out and relate to, the emotions were so real and great for that scene for them.

I was glad to see Demetirus at the front and center again with his new woman as well.

Travis/Lisa/Bonita was another scene that I felt I could sink my teeth into Rob. I think the recasting of Travis really helped bring that scene to life for me.

Overall a great job and I can't wait for next year and I hope you like what I will be sending you for the writer's swap.

Kelly

[Rob Hill]

Thanks a lot Kelly Kels...I'm so excited to read it.
I am so nervous about writing West Lake (even though I've started)
I'll have something for you pretty soon.